Lion

Heyo! I'm the same Puppyfight from youtube here to give you a critique.

I'm first going to say that I love the design, while it's simple it's very well done. As someone who works mostly in digital now I'm ever impressed by what people can do traditionally.

The coloring is great and I can tell a lot of work went into it. Messing up even a slight bit can ruin a traditional art piece so good on ya!

The use of that spiral movement with what I believe to be petals is great, it really leads the eyes to the middle in just the right way.

The only thing I can suggest now is to lineart it with really nice pens of different sizes. Other than that there is nothing I can really add to this!

Good work! I can't wait to see more from you and don't be afraid to @ me or comment on my profile if you want me to critique more of your artwork!